Today’s Mission:
1. Project 2 Recon
2. The Decorum Debate
3. The Fifth Responses
4. Inside and Outside of Shooting War
ProjectTwo Recon:
1. You should have chosen a text from the list of approved texts or should have contacted me by now about your proposed text.
2. Critical Reading (outlined on page 23 in GR)
Where did the argument come from?
What does the argument say?
Can you trust the writer?
How does the argument work?
3. Active Reading: Your brain on a bicycle
Using the best tactics:
Annotating and Mapping (GR 25-26)
4. Target Acquisition:
Fallacies of logic and emotion/language (GR 26-28)
The Decorum Debate
"Decorum or 'appropriateness': Everything within a persuasive act can be understood as reflecting a central rhetorical goal that governs consistent choices according to occasion and audience" (GR 71).
Some ideas to get your head around. . . From "'Transgressing the Boundaries' of Ethical Discourse: Speculations on the Rhetoric of Decorum" by D. Robert DeChaine.
Before we look at your fifth responses, let's look at what DeChaine says about decorum and see if we can relate some of his ideas to Shooting War.
1. What is the occasion? Shooting War: Making or Breaking Reality
Though formally worked out in detail by Aristotle and later refined by Cicero and Quintilian among
others, the idea that “style should suit subject, audience, speaker and occasion” (Lanham,
1991, p. 45) assumed a prominent role in the earlier oratory of the Sophists, notably in texts
such as Gorgias’ “Encomium of Helen.” In such texts, words and stylistic flourishes served to
create a “world of possibility” (Poulakos, 1984) for the hearer; indeed, a traditionally pejorative
notion of rhetoric, as Poulakos notes, can be traced to the Sophists and, specifically, to the
“linguistic spell” which they cast (Id., p. 218). Sophists recognized words as powerful tools of
discourse, tools which they believed could help to frame reality itself. (Dechaine 119)
2. Ethics and Truth
Thus far in the discussion I have advanced an argument that decorum serves as a frame
for our social reality. Along the way I have pointed to two views of rhetoric which, concomitant
with “absolutist” and “relativist” views of truth, define our ability to “find our footing” (Geertz,
1973) in culture. In light of these propositions, it seems to follow that our judgment of the
propriety of texts coincides with our basic criteria for truth; either “the good” is established
within the text and through the process of its creation and interpretation, or “the good” is
measured against the text and its faithfulness to some kind of assumed transcendent
principles (scientific fact or religious doctrine, for example). They simply represent two
different sets of criteria. Neither particularly impinges on the other unless we want it to; we may
choose to make the issue an ethical one, but that is a choice we make. Either way, the
rhetorical power of a text may compel us to adherence regardless of its “truth.” (Dechaine 123)
3. Who is the audience? Where is the common ground?
“Our sense of propriety in a text comes not from the text but from our perception” (Dechaine 121).
The Fifth Responses
Here you'll see student responses classified according to general topics. As we read these responses, I want us to accomplish 3 goals:
1. Respond to the content of the response: Discuss what claims are being made
2. Determine the structure of the response: Find traces of a skeletal structure for the thesis and further develop it
3. Evaluate the detail in the response: Decide how each student incorporated quotes in order to support his/her claims
1. Entertainment versus persuasion
2. Responding to style and tone
3. Issues of consistency
4. Ethos, Pathos, and Logos
5. The central rhetorical goal and its many offspring
The "skeletal structure" for the thesis will likely be some variation on the following:
A = Author(s)
W = Work being analyzed
T = Thesis of that work
X, Y, Z, Q (etc.) = particular strategies used in making/supporting T
In W, A argues T through X, Y, Z.

Completing the Mission:
Inside and Outside of Shooting War: Contextual and Textual Analysis
Some more topics for discussion (If they haven't come up already):
What is the rhetorical situation?
The media
The war in Iraq
The Corporate Takeover of America
American Foreign Policy

Religion and Values
1. How effectively do Lappe and Goldman relate these issues? What works? What doesn’t work? (Let's look at some illustrations as well)
2. What are the claims/arguments of the text?
3. What do you think? The effectiveness of the arguments based on your knowledge, attitudes, and beliefs
4. What appeals do Lappe and Goldman use?
Continue your rhetorical workout in style. . .
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